So with the feed back from our previous animatic, we made some slight changes to the narrative, with regards to the comment in which:
‘there needs to more of an emphasis on the joke of the animation.’
we addresses that. originally, in the end, the baby bird was seen laying face down in a puddle of vomit, whereas now in the revised animatic we’ve changed it so that the baby bird has somehow caught most of the vomit in its mouth and has now inflated and swollen from the sheer amount of vomit its taken in.
The response to the changes were positive, we got the laughs we were looking for, so we couldn’t be happier!